Typeface Design 1.5

It is a shame that some of my manipulations aren't consistent with other concepts that I've had for individual characters and they don't always work in confined reality. This has made me want to make subtle changes to my original typeface as my aim is to create a consistent, legible typeface. 

I have highlighted some characters/sections that I feel need to be further adapted:

Adjusted the width of line to some elements of the type so that the line was consistent. I made the line thinner so that the type had room to breath which makes it easier to read, particularly on large and small scales:

I am pleased that my typeface is legible when it's small as that was one of my primary aims for this brief. Reducing the width of line allows more space for compact characters which makes the type legible and balanced.